Imagine you were one of the unlucky fans who didn’t make it into Whelans to see Ed Sheeran. Write the formal email you would send to the events company outlining your annoyance. Remember to: mention the reason for your email in the fi rst paragraph, outline what happened and then explain what you would like to happen as a result of your email.
Write Texts Competently [W4]
Draft a formal email to enquire about a course that you would like to attend during the Hallowe’en break.
Sample Answer To whom it may concern:
I would like to enquire about your company’s week-long activities course, due to take place over the Hallowe’en break. I would appreciate it if you could send me on the programme outlining the activities on off er.
In relation to the cost of the course, could you please let me know if you accept cheques? I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully, Elliot Mangan
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