Question 2 ‘Derek Mahon explores people and places in his own distinctive style.’
Write your response to this statement supporting your points with the aid of reference to the poems you have studied. (2008)
SAMPLE PLAN Poems
Poems
‘After the Titanic’
People – distinctive style Dramatic monologue
People
distinctive style
Simile draws a comparison between the heroism of the drowned men of the Titanic and the continued suffering of Ismay. Poet’s compassion: ‘I sank as far that night as any/ hero’
Distinctive use of sound devices creating cacophony
Structure/layout implies movement of tide
‘Ecclesiastes’ Tone conveys distinctive antipathy towards a bigoted and unforgiving mindset: ‘ Bury that red/ bandana and stick, that banjo’
Imagery conveys the joylessness of intolerance , an attitude the poet finds abhorrent
Distinctive importance of structure/layout
Dramatic monologue
‘As It Should Be’
Dramatic monologue – distinctive use of persona
Repetition of bleak, grim adjectives conveys aversion to joyless austerity of Ulster Protestantism: ‘ the/ dank churches, the empty streets,/ the shipyard silence, the tied- up swings’
Alliteration/pathetic fallacy (symbolism of rain) conveys character of preacher
Distinctly vivid description of place/compassion: ‘[we] gunned him down in a blind yard/ between ten sleeping llorries/ and an electricity generator.’
‘Blind yard’ symbolises the myopia of the speaker and his companions