‘Mahon uses language and imagery to transform personal observations into universal
Write your response to this statement with reference to the poems by Derek Mahon on your course. (2013)
SAMPLE PLAN Poem
Poem
‘A Disused Shed in Co. Wexford’
Language/Language/ImageryImagery
Personification/alliteration: ‘ an echo trapped for ever, and a flutter/ of wildflowers in the lift-shaft’, ‘ a thousand mushrooms crowd to a keyhole./ This is the one star in their firmament’.
Personification/alliteration: ‘a foetor/ of vegetable sweat since civil war days the pale flesh flaking groaning / for their deliverance web -throated racked by drought/ and insomnia’
‘Rathlin’
Vivid use of sound effects: ‘The whole island a sanctuary where amazed/ oneiric species whistle and chatter,/ evacuating ro ck-face and cliff -top’
Personification: ‘Bombs doze in the housing estates/ but here they are through with history’, ‘ custodians of a lone light which repeats/ one simple statement to the turbulent sea’
Personal observation/ universal reflection
Personal observation/ universal reflection
Acute observation/a reflection upon the value of the unnoticed and the overlooked
Mushrooms personified – evoke moments of private and public suffering that have been ignored or overlooked
Minute observation of suffering emphasises the mushrooms’ torturous existence; serve as symbols of human suffering
Bird life and natural beauty of the island juxtaposed with the threat of violence on the mainland
The poet’s observations of the lighthouse – a metaphor for the lessons of history
Turbulent sea – symbolic of the uncertain and violent times of the Troubles
Dramatic setting offers insight into historical/continuing conflict