Which of these expressions would you use to write about advantages (A) and disadvantages (D)? What other expressions can you think of?
a One drawback of studying abroad is the cost. b The main downside of moving to another country is culture shock. c Another positive aspect of studying abroad is increased confidence. d There are significant advantages in learning another language. e The other criticism of the university is the lack of support for international students.
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Write a 150–200 word essay describing the advantages and disadvantages of one of the following. Use a similar structure for your writing to the one in 2. Follow the steps below.
• doing an internship • studying in a different city in your country
• taking up an extreme sport • studying as a mature student
Step 1 Plan your essay using one of the suggested methods in the C21 skills section on page 145.
Step 2 Draft your four paragraphs. Remember to start each of your main paragraphs with a topic sentence – the main idea for the paragraph. Include words and expressions for adding details.
Step 3 In pairs. Swap your drafts and suggest any improvements to make the writing flow better.
Step 4 Redraft your writing. 140 English for the 21st Century • Unit 10