Heartsong: the creation of a story book duet


Heartsong is the first collaboration between Jane Ray and Kevin Crossley-Holland, and is inspired by stories of the orphaned girls who grew up in the Ospedale della Pietà in Venice, and by the music of Antonio Vivaldi. Here they describe their book and its creation.


Jane: Kevin Crossley-Holland‘s writing is a gift to the illustrator, and I was honoured when he expressed an interest in working on a book with me. We thought long and hard about what this book should be – Kevin sent me ideas, I sent him ideas. There were meetings and discussions, ‘what if?’s and ‘how about?’s … But nothing quite seemed to ‘click’, to fit, to feel absolutely right …


Then I unearthed, from the back of my mind, fragments of a potential story that had begun to form itself on my first magical trip to Venice some years before.


A few scribbled notes in my sketchbook recalled an afternoon in the Vivaldi Museum where I had found a great leather-bound book, listing all the babies left at the Ospedale della Pietà, the orphanage in eighteenth century Venice, where Antonio Vivaldi was music master.


Name after name was scrawled there in long columns in a spidery hand. The last entry on the open page was Laura – no: 317, born 1724. I don’t know why that name, that particular little life, so touched me, but my head and my heart were captured, filled with questions as to who she was, who she became.


I filled a sketchbook with drawings – shadows and reflections, the soft greeny grey of the water, terracotta in the sun, the face of an abandoned little girl. Elements of a story crept in – a beautiful city filled with sound: lapping water; bells and birds; street cries; and of course music, always music. At the heart of these ideas was a song flowing through the story like the dark canal waters.


And the child, Laura, silent, alone, motherless.


I tried to pull the threads and fragments of the story together, but somehow it eluded me. I could ‘see’ the story – the pictures were alive in my imagination. I knew who Laura was, and what she looked like. But the story itself, Laura’s story, refused all my attempts to organise it, kept slipping into the shadows … Frustrated by my lack of progress, I had shoved the sketches to the back of a drawer.


Tentatively, I showed my notes to Kevin. I knew that he loved Venice with a passion, and hoped that something in my jottings might appeal to him.


He knew exactly what to do. He took the scraps and the fragments, discarded some, created many others. He knew immediately who Laura was, what the shape and tone of the story should be. His knowledge of Venice added substance and atmosphere, and his power as a storyteller created the perfect home for Laura.


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So, unexpectedly, here it was – the book that we had so long wanted to make.


When I read his first draft I knew that it was exactly right. The pictures, the colours, the light and the shadow that had all been rattling around disconnectedly in my mind’s eye, now fell into place, an accompaniment to Kevin’s lyrical writing.


Working in this somewhat unorthodox way has been, for me certainly, a real joy. It has required both Kevin and me to abandon any sort of egotistical ownership of the story. I don’t feel that it belongs to us – it was a story that was waiting to be discovered, in the shadows, in that great leather bound book, in the music of Antonio Vivaldi and in the deep canal waters of Venice.


It has been a privilege to tell it.


Kevin:


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This is partly because, out of long admiration and fondness for each other’s books, we simply knew that we wanted to work together – but without knowing what or how. I remember talking in a London club to Jane about possible projects. She politely reviewed the five possibilities I’d brought with me, admitting them all as candidates, before introducing her own – a story turning on Laura, one of the young girls in the Ospedale della Pietà in Venice. To be honest, I think I knew at once (without quite saying so) that this would be the one!


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